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Love and Companionship Chapter 2 : Derpy's Rescue

The next day...

Doctor Whooves walked through Ponyville. He was on his way to pick up Ditzy from the post office because she was working late and asked him to walk her back home.

Yesterday went perfect. Doctor and Ditzy went to eighteenth century Manehattan and had the time of their lives. They went to the local theatre and then they later went to a party in downtown. There, Ditzy taught Doctor how to dance and they danced the night away.

As Doctor trotted through town, he heard something in the alleyway. It sounded like a couple of ponies arguing. He knew it wasn't right to eavesdrop but those voices sounded familiar.

As Doctor got closer and closer, the more the argument got clearer.

"Would you please calm down?" a female pony begged.

"I will not calm down until you tell me what you're doing with that idiotic stallion." A male pony shouted.

"He's not an idiot! He's my best friend and I told you before, he's just walking me home from work. What's wrong with me having friends?"

Doctor finally knew who it was, Ponet and Ditzy. Why was he yelling at her? She's so sweet, innocent, and caring.

"I never said there's anything wrong with it." Ponet said still in anger, "I just don't like you turning your back on me for that lousy time traveler."

"Stop calling him that!" Ditzy yelled, "He's not lousy! He's a more decent stallion than you'll ever be!" With that, Ponet struck her in the face which made her fall to the dirt ground.

"How dare you speak to me like that? You will treat me with respe-." Ponet was suddenly interrupted when a certain chestnut skinned stallion tackled him to the ground.

Ditzy gasped still on the ground. "Doctor?"

Ponet chuckled. "Aw how sweet. The smart mouth idiot came to rescue poor little Ditzy. Seems pointless seeing how you have no strength whatsoever." Ponet was again interrupted when Doctor pushed him back to the ground and moved his face close to his.

"You listen to me." Doctor growled, "If I ever see you near Miss Hooves ever again....I'll use all my strength to make sure you never see the light of day ever again. If you think I can't, you've got another thing coming."

Ponet starred at Doctor angrily then back at the blonde pegasus still on the ground. He got up and kept his gaze at Doctor. "You know what? You can keep her for now. I don't need this worthless feather brain anyway. But just so you know, this isn't the end. I will make you pay." He then starred at the whimpering Ditzy, "Both of you!" With that, Ponet galloped away in the back of the alley.

Doctor glared at him with anger as he ran away, eager to run after him, but then he remembered that Ditzy needed help. He slowly walked towards her and knelt next to her.

"Ditzy?" Doctor whispered to her as he laid a hoof on her back.

Ditzy lifted her head up and smiled at him while blushing. "I'm....I'm okay Doc now that you're here."

As she faced him, Doctor could clearly see the mark on her face from when Ponet hit her. Doctor placed his hoof gently on her cheek where the mark was while having a look of guilt. "Oh Ditzy, I'm so sorry."

Ditzy gave him a confused look "Why? You weren't the one who did it Doctor,"

"I know that, but if I could have gotten here sooner this never would've happened."

Ditzy gave him a smile "Don't worry about it Doctor. You know, I'm glad I asked you to pick me up from work."

Doctor chuckled a nuzzled her neck. "Don't mention it Ditzy. I'm just happy that my assistant is okay." Doctor then looked at her with worry. "Can you stand up okay?"

Ditzy nodded and slowly stood on all fours while wobbling slightly but then found balance. "See? I think I can also fly home." But as she opened her wings up, she let out a sharp painful gasp and moaned slightly.

"Ditzy!" Doctor gasped and held onto her wing, "What wrong?"

Ditzy winced in pain "When he pushed me to the ground, I...I think I landed on my left wing and sprained it."

Doctor carefully examined her wing. "I'll have to take you to the TARDIS and tend to your wing. After words, I'll walk you back home.

"Actually Doctor," Ditzy said nervously, "is it okay if I spend the night with you in the TARDIS tonight? I...I don't feel comfortable being home alone at night, especially with what just happened."

Without hesitating, Doctor smiled and responded softly "Of course Ditzy. You're more than welcome to stay at the TARDIS."

"And another thing Doctor, you know I gave you permission to call me Derpy now right? You don't always have to call me Ditzy."

Doctor chuckled "You're right. Well, this way Derpy." With that, Doctor led the injured Ditzy to the TARDIS.
Well that was Chapter 2. What did you think?

Awww why can’t I have a boyfriend like Doctor? So sweet, caring, and knows when to be badass! XD LOL
I feel so bad for Ditzy, but luckily she has the Doctor to save her. Well I guess most you guys know that the next chapter is going to filled with lots and lots of fluff~~♥ Why am I so good at writing fluff? XP WELP DERP.
I’m sorry this one’s really late. I was waiting to see if this would have some feedback and people wanting to know what happens next. Luckily, a lot of people do. This means I’m doing pretty well so far. /hugs self/

Anyways, please review, favorite, or watch. ~♥~

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therealFlaky Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
Omg İ love this so much !!!! <3<3<3<3<3
Liannemae48 Oct 25, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
oh my goodness this is so cute!you deserve a watch and a fave!
PuddingAlexThompson Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww thanks so much!!♥♥♥
Liannemae48 Oct 25, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I cant wait what's in store for the next chapter
PuddingAlexThompson Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Tanks. I'm planning on updating this weekend.
Hey, Stallion6 here...

I don't think they'll have to worry about Ponet.....

He can't escape the fury of a SPARTAN
PuddingAlexThompson Oct 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hee hee. XD LOL
Yeah. A purple-furred rug sounds good...
Yeah. A purple-furred rug sounds good...
UltraBrony Oct 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I wish I could jump into this story and Beat that arrogant a-hole within an inch of his life. Nicely done as always.
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